Feature Scripts:
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Title: CONNOR (OPTIONED)
Author(s): Mark Brotherhood
Date: 15/2/07
   
Synopsis: A cross between Brazil/1984/Being John Malkovich. Connor isn't a happy man neither is the city inside his head, rain, violence and deluge is bringing the place to a standstill and possible Armageddon. The committee responsible for his actions are failing to appease their master....failing to get him to call his ex love Nicola.......and when they finally do......
   
Appraisal:

'Connor' is a witty and inventive take on the 'people in the head' movie idea. It's outcome (not revealed) is a surprise. And overall the script has a refreshing originality. It would be very easy for something like this to corny and/or cliché ridden. But 'Connor' succeeds admirably in avoiding both. Well worth a look if this genre is your thing.

   
Rating
out of 10:
Story 8
Characters 7
Originality 7
Structure 8
 
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Title: TRAILER
Author(s): Barry Staff
Date: 26-2-07
   
Synopsis: 'Trailer' is a horror/rites of passage story about Jason a 15 year old boy with severe behavioral problems...until he contracts cancer. Then he becomes the model child and the cancer vanishes. However, when it returns he reinvents himself in preparation for the worst, and in the process unwittingly brings together many people around him.
   
Appraisal: Although the synopsis may sound rather bleak 'Trailer' is full of humour, with great character observation. And above all it's superbly written. A real must see script.
   
Rating
out of 10:
Story 8-9
Characters 9
Originality 9
Structure 8-9
   
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